"Fly away from the sea," the old man said.
"Water will loosen the wings, fly high instead.
But do not fly to the sun, for heat will melt the wax."
The boy laughed, "father, your invention will hold, relax."
As they prepared to fly the guards burst in!
"Fly my son! Escape this prison!"
The boy leaped, spreading his wings to fly,
the guards watched in stupefied awe as the two soared through the sky.
The boy cheered, soaring ever higher, nearing the sun.
His father yelled, "stray from the sun!" But the boy was lost in freedom,
until the wax melted, sending the boy down to the sea.
His father flew on, weeping bitterly.
And thus ends the tale of Daedalus and Icarus,
for the pleasurable taste of freedom can blind even the cautious.
I really like this, David! Such a cool allusion to the Icarus story, and what a wise last line!
ReplyDeleteI thought it was fitting, since the poem speaks of a caged bird.
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ReplyDeleteThis story is very sad. Though it is short it is heartbreaking. I love how theres a message at the end that can relate to all, and the story is an example. It is also very creative. Nice job
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